Soul Eater OC review and help?

Long story short, want to write fanfic, want my OCs to be perfect(or at least as much as she can be) okay, so...

My OC's name is Ray(short for Rachel) Joneser. She's a meister, and she comes from a family of extremely powerful weapon, and her family is know to give birthto better meisters every generation, and Ray was kind of a disappointment(she's actually very good, but compared to her family she doesn't come close) so she tries to be the best at everything she does to impress her family. She's pretty calm, and cool, instead of yelling and getting mad she just gets cold and crabby, and is very nice, can be clumsy, and very relaxed

Her weapon is a boy named Ian Cothol, who turns into a pitchfork. His father left him and his mother when he was a baby(not a very interesting story) so just him and his mother he grew up kind of soft hearted. He loves animals, mostly puppies and kittens, and reads alot of comic books and plays video games, and he is a shipper. He is a romantic and loves love, and when he gets bored of fictional characters, he plays match-maker with his real life friends. But don't get misjudge him, he may act like a kitty but if you hurt his friends he diggs like a lion

And they kind of have a yin-yang thing:

Ray belives that people are naturally bad with some moments of good, and teaches Ian to be more couscous

And Ian believes that people are natural good with some bad moments, and teaches Ray to be more loving

Please tell me what you think : )

Thanks