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Essay Help! can you guys try to revise my essay? Because am not that good on writing essay.?
I really need help on this essay it's an exemplification essay, and i had someone check and the thing that where of concern with the example or ideas, so didn't flow and some idea where different and didn't support the thesis or the point i was writing about. The assiment was to write how technology has change your lifestyle, and i did on television and the effect it has on teens.
Below are the images of the essay, i know they are not the best but am asking for help plz am desperate. if the links do not wor let me know and leave your email on the comment.
p.s ( i got 2 day till it due)
1.) https://s.yimg.com/hd/answers/i/53cae26aa39546b18f...
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