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Could someone please read and review a short story I wrote?
http://www.booksie.com/horror/short_story/eschaton...
Be honest but please be polite with any negative comments. Thanks!
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- 7 years agoFavorite Answer
I wasn't really hooked at the beginning and I think it's a little dramatic with the verbs, not that your verbs are bad--just a little overboard.
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