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A poem I Wrote for Creative Writing (CC Please)?
Meteors
Drifting through a hazy mist,
shadows of a darkened day.
As stars collide
our pathways twist,
it takes me very far away.
I follow fear.
The hollow sky
for us to share.
An empty tear
a last goodbye.
For you eclipse
catastrophe,
as stars ignite
I taste your lips.
I’m screaming through the atmosphere.
I’m not afraid
I don’t think twice.
I jump.
Dark clouds fade,
almost to my paradise.
3 Answers
- Lapiz Dominoes.Lv 77 years ago
You have developed your writing style considerably imo.
There is nothing to fault in this very engaging free verse and i enjoyed ins rhythm
as well as the theme`s universal appeal
