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? asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 6 years ago

Does rhyme and alliteration work in this poem [The Miscreant]?

My Lord and my God

A pithy poem to TBO

A bubbly birthday so

It got the lightning rod

After many good answers

To a legitimate poem

The troller's a roam

Here comes his cancers

What a waste of time

To cherry pick deletions

Clean up his excretions

Make God your climb

Amen, and amen

Update:

My poem was deleted. It was a tribute and birthday greeting to Mr. TBO. Boy there must have been a terrible violation of Yahoo Answers rules, oh my! Or, the same ole idiot that wanders aimlessly through life, except for his home here on yahoo to live and use up time, waste it, and let life slip him by.

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  • ?
    Lv 7
    6 years ago
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    Yes as far as I can read it works quite well

    and shows how low humans crawl to have a j.o.

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