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True to himself A Christ follower
What does one do when they can't write a poem anymore?
I am not claiming to be a good poet.
Am average at best, but I have tried
to write and everything comes up
flat.
Perhaps I should walk away from it?
For years, I loved to read and write
poetry. I still want too write, but am
losing my will to pen a poem and
just say 'the hell with it.'
Thank you
Thomas
desperate
9 AnswersPoetry4 years agoIs this poem [The Old War Horse] a certain type and what would you rate it scale 1-10 with 10 being the best, eh?
The Old War Horse
i. the thought
don't ask me why ?
can't answer the query
on why we do the things
we do.
ii. the presage
i came home from a....
let's say a man to man.
after all the battles in
life, blood spilled and
freedom in the balance,
paid in full; at least now
i know my fate. i felt
a juxtaposition of my ken.
iii. the act
transport in lock down,
sliding off the smooth leather
i faced her, or was it him?
i saunter over to her/him
and embrace; been years
but tears found an escape
I rubbed her like a horse's mane
relaxed my head on her sturdy but
soft shouldered skin, and said
"thank you my friend"
we both know our fate, but
still soldier on.
iv. proclamation
i am no tree hugger, but she's
different. What I breathe she
exhales. I need her, appreciate
her, and felt peace in my heart
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Author's Note
A summer several years ago we had
40 straight days over 100° heat, often
over 110°. My War Horse took a beating
on the west side and is dying, yet still
proudly stands tall and strong.
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2 AnswersPoetry4 years agoIs the mixed meter in this poem [Catholic Girls] any good?
Catholic Girls
The Catholic girls are sweet and innocent
The darkest heart you'll ever know
Desire to burn a sin of mortal lust
To please the willing, wait, bestow
Sweet taste of purity shows their true heart
A warning sign she may be good
You screw them over, demons reappear
That once were dreams you understood
They rive your heart with holy rosary
Soul tears with torment, torturous
Exposit flesh that's wanting, still can't have
Betray, mistrust, portrays a sorceress
Repent of sins, one always should obey
Respect embody royalty
The lust for her expunged by self-control
A Catholic girl means loyalty
2 AnswersPoetry4 years agoIs your poetry better, worse, or non-existent so far in 2017?
me - non existent
thanks
21 AnswersPoetry4 years agoWe are nearing Christmas, it signifies the birth of Lord and Savior Jesus Christ; would you?
Write at least one stanza concerning this magnificent event which spells salvation for all those who believe that "Jesus is Lord" and that God raised him from the dead so that we might have life.
Enjoy. Thanks,
Thomas
10 AnswersPoetry4 years agoPoetry under the Trump administration. Thoughts?
I think it will be great. For once, minorities will get an opportunity in this country, maybe even write some poetry.
Thanks
Thomas
7 AnswersPoetry4 years agoDoes this deep one stanza poem carry any meaning for the reader?
The Roots
Our mind seems unmanageable
Thousands of limbs seeking their own path
Branches though send signals from its core;
A root system that resides in ones heart
5 AnswersMental Health5 years agoDo you understand this short poem [The Roots}. Any advice to better the poem?
The Roots
Our mind seems unmanageable
Thousands of limbs seeking their own path
Branches though send signals from its core;
A root system that resides in ones heart
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Author's Note: The pic prompt is of a blank
profile of a face, filled in more than half way
with the stem of a tree, its branches going in
numerous directions. The back of the face
profile was open and not bordered.
1 AnswerPoetry5 years agoWho do you think writes more poetry, Hillary Clinton or Donald J. Trump?
7 AnswersPoetry5 years agoDoes this short story [The Portal] want you to see the next installment, if there was one?
Introduction
I. The Reading
The same attorney that had served the family
so faithfully over the last 50 years, sat and
spoke with a calm but firm, distinguished voice
the past hour nigh, verily trusting each young
man justly as he read the document.
He stopped, looked down
the long oak table with its durable but latent
clear laminate of polyurethane, evincing the
rich character of wood grain that juxtaposed
the same with his current clients. They were
like family ! He would not let these boys down.
The aging professional concluded the
Last Will and Testament
to the six boys....well, now men, of their beloved
Mother.
This tall, admired attorney, a noble himself,
an hours past ensconced in his soft, leather cushioned
seat and arm rest chair, stood up gingerly;
the old joints crunching and snapping as he declared,
“Gentlemen,
we have
concluded your
Mothers wishes.”
II. The Satchel
Mattias, one of two middle sons, sat directly
opposite their family representative of the present
instruction. Mattias whispered “He's
not finished.” Overheard by the counselor, his
rejoinder;
“Yes I am son.”
Dragging the last word like a fish
nibbling on its bait, the elderly statesman, who never retired
and puts in 70 hour work weeks for his law firm, added,
“With your Mother.”
As the man stood stoically Mattias saw the left hand
gripping what looked like a leather satchel. Pulled up
now in full view, peaking out of the satchel was the corner
of a manila envelope with a plastic sheathing.
6 AnswersPoetry5 years agoThe meter in this poem [Types of Tears] was developed by what famous poet? Will you c.c as well?
Types of Tears
The last time that I dropped a tear
So long a time ago
A tear of sadness shows its feel
She's gone that's all I know
Ten years expire gave up on love
Content in who I am
I changed the focus of my life;
The blood of Christ the lamb
Am on to concert at our church;
Believers of the Cross
My heart is pierced by limbate eyes
Tongue tied and at a loss
Go out to eat with friends that night
Large table, chairs were full
Except for one right next to her;
Excite me for the cull
I looked into blue bordered dreamy eyes
A tear of joy; no longer in disguise
2 AnswersPoetry5 years agoDo you like the combination of free verse narrative and Blank Verse to this Templar Knight series poem [Message in a Bottle]?
Proem:
Message in a Bottle
Proem
After Sir Thomas recovered the Spear of Destiny and returned it to the Pope at the Vatican in Rome, he remained there for several months serving His Excellency, attending meetings, and recovering from several minor injuries sustained while recapturing the Spear that pierced the side of Jesus the Messiah. Sir Thomas could have stayed as a guest of the pope in one of their lush suites, but he chose the bare walls of a guest bedroom at the local Knights Templar castle. The pope then called upon him for his next assignment: Leave Rome immediately, by boat, again, back to Constantinople. “Head off a Scot by the name of Sir Robert Bruce, whom our intel indicates has a map and is currently on his way in search for the Holy Grail. Sir Robert is a stubborn ally. You will help Sir Robert, but convince him
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See poem under my account below. Is in Blank Verse, Iambic Pentameter with no rhyme
pattern.. However, the Postscript, a couple, is written Iambic Hexameter, 12 syllable lines
instead of 10 syllable lines.
Thanks
Thomas
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2 AnswersPoetry6 years agoDoes this poem [Eleven Fingers] evoke emotion?
When Mattias was a boy, his Daddy
used to tell him he had:
Eleven fingers.
This amazed Mattias, because he would
clutch each individual finger
off both Daddy's mitts; huge, glove-like
Rugged hands of a carpenter
Soft touch of a surgeon
He slowly sounded off one by one
Left hand: Ten, nine, eight, seven, six
and
Five are eleven [11]
Daddy raised both limbs; flashed eleven
Hugged Mattias and said;
“I love you son”
Mattias felt that love, but
Was marveled that his Father had
Eleven fingers
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4 AnswersPoetry6 years agoIs the Meter correct in this poem called Types of Tears?
Types of Tears
The last time that I dropped a tear
So long a time ago
A tear of sadness shows its feel
She's gone that's all I know
Ten years expire gave up on love
Content in who I am
I changed the focus of my life;
The blood of Christ the lamb
Am on to concert at our church;
Believers of the Cross
My heart is pierced by limbate eyes
Tongue tied and at a loss
Go out to eat with friends that night
Large table, chairs were full
Except for one right next to her;
Excite me for the cull
I looked into blue bordered dreamy eyes
A tear of joy; no longer in disguise
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3 AnswersPoetry6 years agoDoes rhyme and alliteration work in this poem [The Miscreant]?
My Lord and my God
A pithy poem to TBO
A bubbly birthday so
It got the lightning rod
After many good answers
To a legitimate poem
The troller's a roam
Here comes his cancers
What a waste of time
To cherry pick deletions
Clean up his excretions
Make God your climb
Amen, and amen
1 AnswerPoetry6 years ago