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? asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 5 years ago

Is the Meter correct in this poem called Types of Tears?

Types of Tears

The last time that I dropped a tear

So long a time ago

A tear of sadness shows its feel

She's gone that's all I know

Ten years expire gave up on love

Content in who I am

I changed the focus of my life;

The blood of Christ the lamb

Am on to concert at our church;

Believers of the Cross

My heart is pierced by limbate eyes

Tongue tied and at a loss

Go out to eat with friends that night

Large table, chairs were full

Except for one right next to her;

Excite me for the cull

I looked into blue bordered dreamy eyes

A tear of joy; no longer in disguise

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  • 5 years ago
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    The one that made you cry sad types of tears .. ' Tears that you have never cried again never ever have sadder 'Tears fallen from your eyes ?

    The love of your life has gone left '' a table full of people Except the one next to her ..?.. .....Excite me for the cull ..? '' Don't no what that means sorry I'm not very bright .. :) .. Very sad romantic poem ' Who is she ?????

  • Anonymous
    5 years ago

    Spot on Thomas, this is great I'm lost for words. Can I show you a few of my own for you perusal?

    She had won

    Last time I dropped a tear

    was many years ago.

    It was shed from sadness

    knowing she’d gone, that's all I know.

    Ten years expired I gave up on love

    contented made sacrifice.

    I changed the focus of my life

    and embraced the blood of Christ.

    My life now devoted to our church

    a true believer of the Cross.

    Heart pierced by limbate eyes

    their tongues tied and at a loss.

    Evening out with friends that night

    all tables booked and reserved.

    But there was one right next to her

    not book that I’d observed.

    I was in a vortex on the verge of self-destruction

    my tears of joy open to view, she had won.

    I was going to end with this............

    I was in a vortex on the verge of self-destruction

    I knew she was in control and winning.

    Tears of joy open to view, she had won

    now it was time for sinning.

  • ?
    Lv 7
    5 years ago

    Yes. Thanks for sharing.

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