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Is the mixed meter in this poem [Catholic Girls] any good?
Catholic Girls
The Catholic girls are sweet and innocent
The darkest heart you'll ever know
Desire to burn a sin of mortal lust
To please the willing, wait, bestow
Sweet taste of purity shows their true heart
A warning sign she may be good
You screw them over, demons reappear
That once were dreams you understood
They rive your heart with holy rosary
Soul tears with torment, torturous
Exposit flesh that's wanting, still can't have
Betray, mistrust, portrays a sorceress
Repent of sins, one always should obey
Respect embody royalty
The lust for her expunged by self-control
A Catholic girl means loyalty
2 Answers
- THE BANNIBAL ONELv 74 years agoFavorite Answer
Yes It is good...This to me is your best poem in recent memory.
I like how it flows right through.
