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Can you read the intro for my essay? (kinda urgent) Suggestions and corrections!?
Q: What attribute of your personality are you most proud of, and how has it impacted your life so far?
Looking back on my high school years, I vividly remember I was in a limbo between being outgoing and being an introvert. But despite occasionally playing a reserved and quiet character, classmates and teachers had always had a very high level of reliance in me for an opinion. Hence, I was clearly confused, and it wasn’t until the night of my graduation that I had an exact word that could most accurately define me.
“Integrity.”
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- MercyLv 76 years ago
Looking back on my high school years, I vividly remember being in limbo between being outgoing or being an introvert. But despite occasionally playing a reserved and quiet character, classmates and teachers had always had a very high level of respect for my opinion. Hence, I was clearly confused, and it wasn’t until the night of my graduation that I had an exact word that could most accurately define me - integrity.
Source(s): retired teacher - 6 years ago
After introvert in the first sentence, there needs to be a comma and lowere case but. Other than that Looks great!