What do you think of this song I wrote?

(verse 1)

I see you dancing with her

It breaks my heart

I watch for a while

Trying to hold back tears

Ignoring what's going on around me

The end of the world could be happening

And I would never know

I'm too focused on letting nothing show

(Chorus)

So hide all emotion

Keep it all back

Go through the motions

Of each day,like the last

And never, ever

Feel pain,or at least

Hide it away

(Verse 2)

I see you with her

It tears me apart

I want to scream out

And tell you that behind your back

I see her snide remarks

Her snarky looks

Her bitchy tone, but I keep it inside

And I bottle all Iv'e tried to hide

(Chorus)

(Bridge)

If you would look me in the eye

Maybe you'd realize

What true love can look like

See the pain of my broken heart

If you search long enough

(Chorus 3x)

(Ending)

I see you dancing with her...

It breaks my heart...