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Do you like poems with strings?
Cat Revision of String Theory
(It’s a bit of a yarn. A tall tail. Outside the box. Skinner’s and Shroedinger’s)
They say that dreams are self-contrived:
Mine are the eight lives I have survived.
I still chase my tail, and I don’t care how it seems-
I’ve faced trial by fire, in those dreams!
Consciousness, so far from thoughts
Controlled so carefully, these plots
Are rows of six foot holes, then mounds,
Unsettled, quaking, shaky grounds.
Conception smiths our coded bits,
The feeble fetus forms, forgets,
And learns to follow lesser desires,
Repress the surging inner fires.
They say it’s silly that I feel feline;
That there is madness burning in my mind.
Curiosity kills, they advise…
I’m just biding my time- counterclockwise.
Human is just a shape I chanced to wear
When the feral kitten left its astral lair.
I still want to follow those creatures with wings,
Who aren’t held to ground by theories with strings.
Tick-tock, talk about time, future, past,
Divining our answers on devices, forecast
To swindle us out of living with purpose,
By promising us happiness can be purchased.
I don’t buy in, I’d rather fall to bones,
Trampled by masses as they rush to cast stones,
Judging, demanding we slave, struggle, pay.
Life is a big ball of yarn. I must play…
7 Answers
- ?Lv 75 years agoFavorite Answer
In defense of strings
Ah but strings my dears
Are the music of the spheres
They do not restrain
But like a violin's complain
They offer up more
Of a musical floor
A place to takes stances
Of feline romances.
Your words are heartfelt and glorious and true,
But I just had to give my strings theory it's due.
I am a puppet of a hanging man standing in place
And my strings aren't limits
But delimiters of space.
My determined grin isn't choice or sin
It's the eternal message that was always within.
I do not need freedom to be free
For cause strung to effect is what makes me me.
- doeLv 75 years ago
I love the connection with intuition of a past life and the struggle now in the rat race. Too many favorite lines to pick just one.
- ?Lv 75 years ago
any poem you write I like.
Theses lines are scary...Oh my..
6 feet under no good..
Are rows of six foot holes, then mounds,
Unsettled, quaking, shaky grounds.
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