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John asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 3 years ago

Could somebody please critique this poem?

"On a Christmas Card"

On X-mas day we celebrate

that sweet nativity of X''s,

whom jealousy's god's son we rate,

knew neither girl gods nor sex's.

For merciful forgiveness, though,

compassionating empathy,

he was no slouch - and so

in all our pantheons he'll be

with those love-gods we venerate

with maybe readier devotion -

mad votaries DO take the notion.

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  • 3 years ago
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    it is good as is for what it is

    Merry Greek mas ya geek mas

    but maybe Capitalize He'll

    For Xmas maybe on X mas

    since X is greek letter but you knew that:)

    it also roman numeral for 10 lost tribes

    and on a side note as you may know

    five greek letters

    Iota Chi THeta Upsilon Sigma Final

    all fit together

    and form the little fish sign

    or within that little fish are five letters

    Jesus Christ Gods Son Savior

    ichthus in greek pantheon is fish

    I-ota CH-i TH-eta U-psilon S-igma

  • 3 years ago

    I like the perception of the xhrist as part of a pantheon

    ......and hereby declare you this December`s `Gods Champion`,

    our personal poetic

    `Christmas Champion of The Pantheon`!

  • 3 years ago

    Two possessives in a row make it unique.

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