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Shazy
Lv 4
Shazy asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 2 years ago

Do you like this Christmas poem?

One little Angel

flew down from

the very top of the tree

and softly landed

tiptoeing around

upon the edge of my knee!

"Don't cry" she said

with a rosebud smile,

"Angels never forget!"

With tiny white feathers

this magical creature

dried my teardrops of regret.

I never grew up!

Always imagining,

giggling and trying

to enjoy everyday ...

But they did!

The children grew up,

so alone beside a tree

is the price I must pay.

Couldn't give them houses

cars or every single thing

their little darling hearts

did so dearly desire ..

Love doesn't add up!

Love isn't sharing a cup,

nor does it create Empathy!

Love only made me a liar!

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  • 2 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    It needs a little something, yet, but shows promise.

  • Anonymous
    2 years ago

    It's boring tbh. No interesting points and poetry for Christmas? oye vey

  • humpty
    Lv 7
    2 years ago

    It doesn't scan very well, but keep working on it.

  • Anonymous
    2 years ago

    Hi

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