Worst poem of all time! ?

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Visions of long ago
Welcome to the final show
These are my concluding words
We are merely written in records

I watched you walk away
Never found anyone to stay
Feeling lonely and cold
I have nobody to hold

Alone in the dark
Chimes of a broken heart
Can we go back to the start
Before you and I fell apart

The clocks never stop
Tick tock, tick tock
The years are passing by
Is it too late to try?

This is goodbye
For I have no tears left to cry
One last thing to say
Time to fade away

ausblue · Accepted Answer

poem is pretty good,but im no expert   .........

if love failed  when at first it was great 
is simply was because you  stopped  being loving always as  when you first met

Anonymous · Answer

This is actually pretty good.

frombrum · Answer

pointy birds
pointy pointy
anoint my head
anointy nointy

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In Dillman’s Grove, our love did die,
And now in ground shall ever lie.
None could e’er replace her visage,
Until your face brought thoughts of kissage.

sonikuriaayee 👸🏻 · Answer

Poems are empty words, not to be taken seriously, they talk about desire to be together but it never happens in real

Anonymous · Answer

It's a pretty good poem in my opinion.  I'm not really one to judge poetry though.

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