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How would you evaluate my level of English? I've written a few paragraphs about Russia.  Rate, please, from 1 to 10. ?

I want to put here my reflections on Russia. Today's world became too tight. It differs from the time when humanity was closer to nature and chaotic existence. Back then you could attack a neighboring tribe without a lawful reason.

You could just do it because you want to take their women, food, or other resources. Or, you could just start the war for the sake of practice not to lose battle skills with years.But, inside the tribe, there were certain rules on how to behave with your fellows. After all, a society can't survive without trust regulated by the law.With millennia humanity spread over the world. We became too close to each other. It became much beneficial not to kill your neighbors, but to train and mutually adopt experience.In that manner, the whole world became one tribe, where states are individuals with their own interests. But, relations between those individuals regulated by international law.Let's take the analogy with rebels against the law within the framework of the nation. There's always were such people who don't agree to obey the law. They're called "criminals".Thus, Russia chose this role in the international arena: to be a criminal and sociopath. Essentially, Russians say "we don't want to obey your laws we are acting according to our own rules".

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    Lv 7
    1 month ago

    Your English syntax is not bad but the meaning is hard to understand.

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