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I made this song it's the first I've recorded and I would like some honest criticism since everyone I show keeps gassing me telling me how good it is I would like some advice I could actually use.

I would appreciate specific lyrics that seem weak/awkward and any tips about the instrumentals/recording techniques if you are experienced with these things.

not trying to spam or get views just honestly want feedback

http://www.hotnewhiphop.com/en/play/s/70af6fc-2884...

Okay so on one of my usual music download rampages on limewire (don't judge It's the only way to get music that isn't on any CD's) i downloaded a bunch of songs by who has recently been one of my favorite artists i downloaded a few songs that have got me curious about Johnta Austin's sexual Orientation. Not a homophobe just curious

in the song "First Love" by Trey Songz Ft. Johnta Austin Johnta says "And if she can give you something that i can't... And at the end of the day all i have to say is boy you're my... And I'm so sure i can date another man" and in another song, "what you need" he also says "what you need Boy you know that i got it" but on the same hand he talks about girls in other songs.

Please help me!

I'm 17 and i was wondering if there was anything i should be doing to start a career in pastoring/ preaching obviously i can't actually be a pastor right now but i was wondering if there were things i should be doing early on. I'm going to be a senior in high school this fall. if you guys have any advice it would be much appreciated :)

i got a couple of raps that i want 100% honest feedback on and i dnt think i can get that from my friends

When im alone in my room

sometimes i talk to myself

best person to talk to when i need some help

I'll talk about the world

and ill talk about politics

how we got boys in iraq catching hollow tips

sometimes i think about my life and i think about my job

and that makes me wish i would've joined the mob

Sometimes i think about the love of my life

and wonder if shell end up being my wife

constantly wishin she was next to me

thinking of the ways shes best to me

she completes me

but depletes

when she's not around it's a sad sight to see

dont act like the man im supposed to be

dont get me wrong she's the perfect lady

but get this right she drives me crazy

i just wanna get her alone

she really turns me on

she's got this wonderful figure

that really makes me bigger

with a beautiful smile

that always drives me wild

i was gonna put more but i ran out of charac

I'm in a strange predicament. I am really confident when im with a small groups such as 2-3 people but when im with a larger group like 5-10 or at a party i lose a lot of confidence and i get really shy. When im with a small group of buds at the mall i have no problem approaching a girl. but when im at a party i have a problem moving from my spot on the couch. Someone please give me some answers

I bought the new kanye west cd last night and my 1998 GMC jimmy wont play it! it will play I am by Nas wich is an older CD it will play it fine. just not kanye. it plays everything else other than burned CD's and kanye. i put it in and it spits it out and says error. it played this morning after i tried putting it in ten times but it hasnt played since then

this might sound stupid but on alot o stunna shades i cant tell if they for girls or guys help me out please n dont hate

I Recently won a suziki dirtbike from a friend but i dont know anything about them I need to be able to start it to sell it though please give me a basic breakdown of how to start a dirtbike

My cat had kittens on April 1st and i was wondering how long you should wait to give them away thanks!

i dont understand why some people only want to make fun of christians and they feel it is their job tomake every christian see that there isnt a god if you dont beleive in a god why would you hate someone else's God? Please help me understand

Lately i've been doing some soul searching and i dont know who i am anymore. i wear a certain style of clothes and i act a certain way but im not sure if this is me. im in high school and people always tell me to act like myself but tim not sure i know who i am. i dont know what questions to ask myself or what to do to find myself. can anyone give me some kind of deep words that will flip a switch in my head so it makes more sense?

Me n my friends love dancing at school dances and stuff but theres only a few every year and we were thinking about goin to an underage club but i heard somewhere that little kids like 12 and 11 go to those and i wouldnt wanna be there then

btw we are juniors in high school

whos music do you think will still be heard in ten years? twenty?

example of classsics:

otis redding

marvin gaye

montel jordan

james brown

ect.

anyone know when his new album is coming out?

that movie looks BADASS!!!!

baby when we grindin i get so excited

ooh how i like it

i try but i cant fight it!

oh you dancin real close

ya makin it hard for me!

do the next verse keep it goin!

i downladed all the like 400+ songs on my ipod but i stilll prefer buying cd's to downloading personally

please help me!

its a blue 59fifty angels baseball hat i would apreciate any tips