Another Poem?

Invisible

Why can't you hear me
I'm talking to you
Why can't you see me
I'm standing in front of you
Are you deaf and blind
Why do you leave me behind
Why can't you understand
Who I am


So whatcha think?

2008-03-05T21:17:59Z

Sorry I can't bring myself to write a false happy ending.

Jay Argentina2008-03-05T20:46:16Z

Favorite Answer

change last line to I love you

bright eyes2008-03-05T20:17:32Z

Wow. i love it!
i think its an amazing poem.