Is poetry art, or is art poetic?

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the hidden eye

can take a structure
a practical structure
(they use it all the
time) and

                t
                  o
                 s
it into  u          s       s
          s                  s
           e                e
             l            n
               e  s  s


and they look
twice
and say it's
                (crazy
                  isn't
                  it)
Art


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©1968,1998,2009 Paul Amorose. All rights reserved.

2009-10-07T16:49:30Z

I wrote this poem when I was a freshman in college.
was reminded of it when one of my contacts posted
this question in P&S:
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AteqlJ1d8HuYboHOil.3zLM8.Bd.;_ylv=3?qid=20091007113535AABOtEC

2009-10-07T16:58:03Z

I was heavily under the influence of,
um, ...e.e.cummings, when I wrote this.

2009-10-07T17:11:13Z

mmmmm....Ding Dongs

2009-10-12T06:50:27Z

@Stephen R:
Thank you for your input. I respect your opinion.


@those who asked how I did the spacing:
I've posted the answer here
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20091012064645AAeeJZz

Anonymous2009-10-07T17:08:42Z

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I wish I had me a big fat joint and some Hostess Ding Dongs right now.

Shannon2009-10-07T18:15:13Z

Often, both are artfully deceptive. Art can be poetic in its power to inspire, while poetry can be art from the images it creates in the mind's eye (not the hidden one).

This was my answer to your inspiration link.

Perspective is everything. With your hand on its surface, the Pyramid of Khufu is just a crooked wall.

Edit: Your description of the handiwork of the hidden eye explains the present condition of our government no matter which party is in power.

Susan2016-04-06T17:02:40Z

Yes. Rap is the most poetic form of music out there. Rap has good storytelling, multi-syllable rhyming, a nice flow, etc... I could go on and on about how poetic Hip Hop is.

Яα∂íǚм Яα∂íατǿſ2009-10-08T03:02:00Z

I'd say that poetry is a form of art, but art isn't always poetic. That's an interesting, and interestingly structured poem you have there, though.

Mizzy2009-10-10T08:12:00Z

I hear light blues
and taste burnt beans
screaming sighs
mixing with thoughts
of paths of Plath's
Eye Rhymes

can I just have an oatmeal cream pie instead?
I pretend like they are healthy...

I like this! and yes, how did you tame yahoo, even if for this moment?

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