How's this YouTube intro? Tips?

Okay, so i just started to get into editing. This was one of my first intro's i ever made, and i want your guys feedback. Rate it 1-10 and tell me if you liked it or not and tell me how can i improve. I used Sony Vegas Pro 8 for this, and it is currently the only editing software i have. Here's the link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0NTnjX9_9FI&list=UUMJY9Oidy_cPzHjjLDhdcYQ&index=1&feature=plcp

BAN2012-04-23T07:34:58Z

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Well
it was good. not excellent but good.
i'll give it 5/10


Hope it Helped

Horselover31702012-04-23T16:21:54Z

Interesting.... Your talking about the pink/red flashy one right?

I'd give it a 6/10