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Family Stranger

He has to leave.

Its hard to explain;

hard to fix.

how do I say

its time to go?

we sit laughing,

What needs to be said

was said

I know the time has come

its all so good

Smiles.

But mama looks

I know,

he has to go.

bad actors on a tiny stage,

I leave the room,

what can I say, what can I do,

Papa, I call,

has to come

away from family

no longer his

I love u papa,

so you must leave now.

this isn’t your home

try to see

its hard to say

just leave.

go back to your house.

I know your alone.

not my fault.

papa must go.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    very good. your talented:)

  • 1 decade ago

    Yes, do pay attention to the grammatical mistakes. I think the poem is good because I feel your pain.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Oh so sad. I hope papa finds happiness.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    That's nice.

    Good Luck!

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  • 1 decade ago

    It's sad, but really, really good. And it's good you have this medium to deal with your feelings.

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    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    very deep i like it a lott

  • 1 decade ago

    i think it rocks,,,,,,,,, you are good at poems keep up the good work

  • 1 decade ago

    Wow !

    I think it is Great!

  • S K
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    'I know your alone.' should be 'I know you're alone.'

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Dont make sence!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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