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Echo asked in Arts & HumanitiesPhilosophy · 1 decade ago

poetry from heart!!!, what do you think?it starts: I've forgotten, forgotten that there's more, much more to

life than looking,Looking only at what others have explored The world so big and diverse,will it get better or will it get worse?My biggest fear is not what will change But that I won’t be able to climb the mountain range Over all those rocky cliffs and hills Wind whipping, giving me the chills You can only stand alone so long Until you need a place to belong But see, I’ve forgotten Forgotten that there’s more to life So much more to life than looking On the outside instead of in To be the one through the window Someone who has been Been ugly, smart, and tired Been beautiful and glad Been thin, been rich, been fired One day realizing that they have had Had seen the world through living Have felt the pains of life But also sensed the feeling Of a loving bond through strife Thank God for tiny moments Ones there always are each day When we’re happy or at peace For making on our way So stop and take a moment to sort your seconds from your years and see if it's as important as it appears

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    Brilliant.......I felt so clearly,

    It's really from the heart.

    It appealed to my mind

    As strong as an emotion.

    By the way, is it your creation?

    If so,I must say...."you're great".

    [I like writing poems.More correctly saying, "I love poems".]

  • ?
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    Well done, moose ! Well-done indeed. Stay with this thing, poetry.

    Always bear in Mind [for the Heart already Knows] that the Heart is not alone an emotional thing. The Heart is what emotions and still all other things, living and non-living, have in common.

    And always know to wander, where the hitherto unkown forces live and dwell, packed with the light and sound ever given only to the select chosen few.

    Alone but not lonely, ever allow that Life should show you the sun-lit path of the wanderer.

  • luella
    Lv 4
    5 years ago

    haha Like trying to remember if I took the clothes out of the washer and put them in the fridge. I have trouble remembering what things are called sometimes. lol No, I'm fine. Really.

  • 1 decade ago

    it good but didn`t touch my heart you understand try to shortin it just alittle

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  • ?
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    too much for this little space

  • 1 decade ago

    ~~~ It boggled my brain. ~~~

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