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title or no title?
In a land afar he holds it down
in muck so fair on earth so seedy
it writhes in pleasure in fear in hatred
in hands unsanded breathing air unfiltered
untampered by oxygen or greed or years,
vocabulary or innocence.
he hangs it up on jutting stone
he hangs it up on electric anger
buzzing white and black
tearing up and down the lanes told by change
and promise
he holds it tight against his chest
it comes to life against his will.
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- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
I firmly recommend a title that gives the reader an idea of the subject matter. The poem is filling in the picture, but I don't know what the subject of the picture is. If you start with the noun/idea that the poem is about - then the rest of it will make more sense and fit.