Here is my Poetic Composition. Please tell me what you understand by this ?

Dear Respected Deito,

Surely, undoubtedly,you have reached a certain level in the spiritual ladder.Otherwise the wording and the verses you wrote are impossible to write simply.Let the inspiration grow and I wish and pray that you attain the heigher peaks and ultimately, the top most peakSumeru Srunga.

Hansa is the breath.Where can it go except to that realm where there is no matter,It has to reach that emptiness which is Full.So with wings (two) not a wing, it has to travel.But my friend where does the travel take place?Where is the realms of all the three verses?In your own Manokaashaa.Blessed are you .

Mano hansa.Mind is the seat of our intellect, knowledge, logic etc.We have to use this very mind to transcend it to reach that realm where even the Intellect is Purified and Nothing but PURE CONSCIOUSNESS exists , again in your Manokaasha.

Jeeva,This is the one that bears the mortal frame and has the so called death, which many people are afraid of.But the Yogis know that this death is not real and does not exist at all.So in that state surely it defys the death that which is illusionary and which is the Maya.

A very beautiful and meaningful and Yogic compilation in a transcendental state.Keep it up and reach the Goal.My namaskarams to you.God is pleased with you, and we are fortunate to have you here amongst us.

God bless you.

What a beautiful Composition, Its a clear portray of your poetic Excellence My dear Deito.

let me repeat once, oh my god i am in love with these words of yours :

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Prana Hansa, Spread your wings and fly,

To the Realms, Where matter mystify !

Mano Hansa, Spread your wings and fly,

To the Realms, Where intellect Purify !

Jeeva Hansa, Spread your wings and fly,

To the Realms, Where death Defy !

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Last time when you wrote in Urdu and Hindi, i was not able to understand it completely.

But here i guess Jeeva Hansa is soul, Prana Hansa is body and Mana Hansa is mind.

Extremely Beautiful , and Why do i feel some special Vibrations, in this arrangement of words, as if i am spelling some chant, or spell, and some mantra of some kind.

Even though it is in engligh, it sounds like some mantra.

What is this special vibration Deito, Can you explain me please, Apart form the rhyming words and choice and meaning, there is some sacred vibration, i can feel it, and i see that some others ahve also felt the same way.

Waiting for reply from you, My dear Deito.

Lots and Lots of love.

EDIT EDIT EDIT : Thank you so much Deito, I Love you so much, can I get a tight hug please.

Ariel.

Many think that jeeva is The immortal Self.

It is not. Refer the 13th chapter of Bhgavat Geetha

Also refer teachings of Bhagavan Ramana Maha Rishi

He says there are no two Atma, the jeva-atma and paramatma. The Reality is indivisible. "Ekam Vibhum." It is the mind that thinks “I am living” not the self that is bound in the body.Since the self is all pervading where is the question of flying?

Next: your inner core, the heart, the self is advising you (mind) to abide to the intellect (whish is the faculty of discrimination). Next: your body is strained, (mystify). So the mind wants to vivify through prana. Hamsa= I am That - That I am. It is So Ham. So ham--Ham sa. It is called abstract meditation. People who meditate on Lord Krishna will write inspiring poems without being a poet. I hope it is clarified. The Bhagavat Geeta has been scientifically commented by a very few. Read H.H. Swamy Sivananda's commentaries. They are all Self realized persons. It will inspire you. Thanks for giving me an oppertunity to meet you. it is a best philosophical question. Go a head please. I want to know where I get tired.

Um...there is a famous rap group called "The Roots" who DO play instruments such as the drums and guitar. Look them up if you don't believe me. Rapping IS talent. Just because you don't percieve it as real music doesn't mean it doesn't take creativity. Creativity is the operative word here. Rapping is poetry. Not always (hence the mainstream rap world), but a lot of it is. Even tho I don't always necessarily agree with the things that are talked about, I can't deny the art of it and how amazing it is to see people freestyling off the top of their head! And you say thats not talent?? YOU try doing that! I personally don't listen to metal, because it is loud and makes my head hurt. I prefer music that makes me want to dance and music that is mellow. At the same time I do not discredit metal as a genre of music. I don't say its crap, because if it was then no one would be listening to it. I prefer hip hop and you prefer metal and I accept that. However, you seem to be angry for some reason. Why is that?

The wings of spiritual power will soar with you riding high, get past the mysteries of matter through contemplation, and get you to a station in worldly life where the intellect is purified through meditation and spiritual attainments, and then you are at the lofty heights beyond Death, beyond suffering, beyond bondage! -- all that the way you want, you will: and, the essence of the poem reveals that inner quest, and the certain result! Thank you for sharing the great vision through the short poetic expression, and tossing it up for the few of us to deliberate on!

Actually there should be a right to anyone to comment on great works... I am not being over humble, but really I am a lesser person because I have less self-control....

So I will not comment on your great work.

But what I understood by that?

Prana is the life-force which you are asking to unite with apana and travel upwards to reach the sahasrara chakra which is the abode of spirit...

Mind is diverted from senses and world consciousness and mind is given to universal consciousness or God.

Jeeva means a Soul with Ego and Mind..... So you are asking Jeeva to become immortal by dissolving Ego.....

Thank You.

You deserve applauds, for if this is to be believed, then you are lucky enough to get the mercy of Lord. Forget about the rest of the world and stick to your path of serving God, you are very near and sure to meet him!

Thanks for sharing your thoughts. A lot of distinguished members of Yahoo answers have already answered your question which relates to nothing but pure spirituality.

Sri Paramahansa Yogananda mentions that the "hang swa" meditation practiced in the east is the same as "soham" (vedic mahaa vakya) and prescribes the same for meditation by his disciples (kriya yoga practitioners)..

Sri Sai babaji says the "hamsa gayathri" (hamsa hamsaaya vidmahe, parama hamsaya dheemahi, thanno hamsa prachodayaath) is the extension of the mahaa vaakya (Soham) as it verily sounds soham when chanted continously as nicely explained by you..

apart from this i am not qualified to comment on the excellence of your poetic / spiritual inspirations.. but i am excited by the comments of a few who have drawn inspiration from your mystic verses... may you coninue to inspire people with your sublimating verses..!

Jai Sri Ram..

I dont know because my mother was a Devdasi and my sisters are belly dancers in Bangalore, I hate all hindus.

My main job is giving thumbs downs to good answers and reporting good hindu people. This my hans gayatri " I hate everyone Om"

I hate deito aradhana chamunda aum, cosmiccoyote deep Ranger, Radhakrishnan, subbu and all good hindus

Superb Deito, we expect lots more of this kind from you.

Pran Hansa; Go beyond this world (matter) and the worldly pleasures (Maya).

Mano Hansa; Go beyond your intellect to get the pleasure of God (I call Him Krishn). That suggests that God is beyond the scope of human intellect.

Jeevan Hansa; Go beyond the feeling of death by living in eternity, for the soul never dies. Feel yourself a soul and not the physical body.

Harimama Harimama Harimama Kevalam.

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I LOVE YOU JAYARAMAN. THESE PEOPLE SEEM TO HAVE FORMED A CONSORTIUM AND THEY ARE JUST IN THE GAME OF APPRECIATING EACH OTHER.