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This is my very first poem. Did I get my thoughts across?
A DREAM COME TRUE
When I was a boy and looked to the sky
At an airplane that seemed like a toy
And flying, oh so high.
At that moment, I thought "I wish I could fly".
All the time as a teenager in school,
I continued to think "Flying is so cool".
And then our country became involved in a war,
While my dream remained as before.
Joining the military, with heart so true,
I learned how to fly, in a uniform of blue.
Being so young and somewhat crazy,
Some of the missions are a little hazy.
Then came a truce, an end to hostilities,
That gave me new responsibilities.
Today, I still fly in a uniform of blue,
Whenever I go into the "Wild Blue".
Although the skies aren't wild anymore,
I thank God, as before,
For allowing me to fulfill my dream of flight,
Be it during the day or during the night.
Now, as I look to the sky
Thank you God, that " I can fly!"
7 Answers
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Well, as someone with a post-grad degree in English Lit, it is a very very good poem. Yes your thoughts do come out and it's well written. A- (It deserves an A+ but if I start students off at the top, they have nothing to aim for). A++, I read the poem below and realized that his stunk and yours was really good. Remember, Illegitimus Non Carborundum. (Don't let bastards wear you down).
- 1 decade ago
You brought tears to my eyes! It really seems as if I was the little boy... Is this a true story? It is wonderful and so very creative.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
Wow!! This is really good! I love it... I am also really glad you followed your dreams!! You are the people I love to look up to. Thanks for giving me an example that I can too, concur my dreams as long as I put my mind to it. :)
- 1 decade ago
I loved it. I really got the message. Nice poem. you should become a famous poet
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- Anonymous1 decade ago
you dreamed you could fly
and to do it you're happy to blow
people up from the sky
you may thank God
For what you can do
But I'm pretty sure that
the innocent little boy
who lost his innocent daddy
when you attacked from above
is not so happy with what
you have done with God's gift
so let me warn you
what may be coming down the line
for you: as you live
so you shall die
how do you like my poem?
- 1 decade ago
..ouch the other person's poem was rowdy..lol..but your poem is very good..i loved it..your talented!!..don't let people discourage your motivation..keep it roll'n..
