Is this another "Ocean trigee?"?

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My first attempt. Please be savagely honest, so that I don't do another one.

An Ocean Trigee ....or..... Sail on or Ceylon, It's Not My Cup of Tea.

O shun the trigee......................Beware of the allure
Avoid the rocky reef..................That beckons you forward
Eschew this insane form.............You will likely be skewered.

C.S.Scotkin · Accepted Answer

Don't bother to look for my first one!  You nailed it!  And watch out, this little buggers are addictive once they wiggle into your brain...

? · Answer

Too late--I've already decided to try one. I'm not a fan of the form myself and have in the past never thought of trying one, but CS's have "allured" me.

Now this one has me scared; I wasn't thinking about rocky reefs and all.

Elaine P...is for Poetry · Answer

Jeff! You wrote a Trigee! I am ecstatic!

Savagely honest? Okay, it is a real Trigee!

*back home* · Answer

^^ Even though I have no expertise whatsoever with poetic forms, is it fine for me to say that I liked it (a lot)? T'was bootiful.

Reenie: Mom of Marine · Answer

ATTEMPT??
To be savagely honest, you've succeeded! (I hope that doesn't sound too harsh, I'm just being honest.)

Marguerite · Answer

This is a true Trigee.  You've done did it!  And funny too.

Farmer · Answer

the first one is always tough..
funny youre in a boat with it. lol

Anonymous · Answer

The Trigee ...........................a puzzle piece that
quietly, while spinning,...........dangles on threads 
awake in unraveling minds.........which tantalize...

neonman · Answer

O Jeff.......................How sweet
a Trigee....................this is
from you...................your Trigee

My heart is just fluttering! lol

___ · Answer

I ate........................tasting irony 
& decided................to split 
the lines..................with periods.

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Is this another "Ocean trigee?"?

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