What do you think of "The Choice"?

I liked it... very good visually. My only suggestion, that I didn't see already mentioned, is you might put a few line breaks to help slow the pace of reading it. I found myself reading it faster and faster until I reached the end... not sure that's the effect you wanted.

I suggest you carry a rhyme scheme throughout the entire poem. Maybe I'm just tired from the birthday party of my 3 year old twins, but I find my mind wandering and that is never good in a poem.

It is very interesting.

T.

Seriously, you need to be more ambitious than just posting in yahoo questions. This is really good. Every consider taking this to another level? I'm dead serious. Don't let anyone, even your friends, sway you from your destiny.

A nice style. Some lines need grammatical help.

I've seen this style before..I like it a lot...Gives freedom for words to sort of fall in place.......Great thoughts MB

For what it's worth I like it a lot...

I mean I don't know much about this type of stuff, but I do know what I like

A poetic message. You have done well; I like this very much.

Like it very much ,,,,,,,The message comes through loud & clear,,,,Good Job!!!