Would you comment a late nighter?

You do little things well! Nice.

Your use of the Rubaiyat format aaba, plus echoing the third line of each stanza, was very effective. The poems that come off looking "simple", yet addictive, are the ones with the most sophistication. Many will say, "I could have written that"...but few would really be able to do so.

Congrats...nicely done, keep writing

Little things make life go on and on.Good Job, J !

i absolutely love it!!

thats exactly how i feel too!

this poem almost reminds me of the song

"a few of my favorite things" from the sound of music haha

i love the question as well!

we should all get rings that say LN on them for late nighters haha

"late-nighters unite!" *clash rings together*

yeahh..that would be sweet.

lol but anyways, really awesome poem!

It is the little things that make life worth living. You have expressed it well.

Little things mean a lot.

You are a great person who appreciate things even if they are small.I admire your attitude and keep on going in the same direction.

PP: did you recognize why I pulled you over, Ms. Jonni? J: No, Sir, Officer. PP: I pulled you over because your cat isn't securely confined. did you recognize the way many cats get out and carouse this way? J: Huh? PP: Please, be extra careful next time.

I LOVE IT!!!

It's so true. We live life for those little things, like my puppy's sloppy kisses (and those irresistible puppy eyes that i ALWAYS fall for)

Joy is to be found in simplicity. Nice rhyming!