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What is the best way to write a poetic duet?
This was written by myself and Sin. We decided to see if we could communicate in metered rhyme and what you see here is the results of a couple of days emails, writing 2 tetrameter stanzas per email. (D) precedes my writing, (S) precedes the writing of Sin. It was fun, and proves that poets don't have to compete. I find I like this form very much, and next time will try with a different format. Maybe sonnets.
Dondi and Sin's Duet
(D)
To talk to you in rhyme this way,
And listen to the words you say.
Could give us fun and happy times,
While we still talk in metered rhymes.
If you would like to try a few,
Then add to this a verse or two.
Then send it back from whence it came,
And then for you I'll do the same.
(S)
I'd like to give this game a try,
If you can rhyme then so can I.
And so I'll send my lines to you,
To see what next your pen will do.
I see the metered count is eight,
At least for now at any rate.
Do you suppose that count will change?
(Metered rhyme has quites a range.)
(D)
A subject now we need to find,
Duet to please poetic mind.
A song that both of us may sing,
It could become a wondrous thing.
Your beauty I could here expound,
With words that do not make a sound.
Until I speak them all aloud,
To lift your spirits to a cloud.
(S)
Yet beauty is as beauty does,
And once it's gone, it never was.
So let's find something deeper friend,
As beauty will most surely end.
And how could I duet with you,
In beauty mine (however true).
And still claim modesty as mine?
So topic still we must define.
(D)
Your words are heeded as I write,
Alas, no topic is in sight.
What will I write for you to read?
Which ego should I try to feed.
With happy words or words of dark,
Or words of walking in the park.
This thing will grow huge by and by,
And we won't have to even try.
(S)
I fear this prophesy is true,
A garden grown by me and you.
With blooms of words to our delight,
That speak of things grown by the light.
For poetry is such a flower,
Words that give our thoughts such power.
That even on this blank white page,
One can smell the Rose and Sage.
(D)
Our poem written as duet,
May be the best that's written yet.
I do not know if it's been done,
This may well be the only one.
We wrote this with eight beats per line,
It fits with boogie music fine.
I'll play my guitar, you can sing,
We'll cut a record with this thing.
(S)
And when this record hits the air,
Will people dance without a care?
And tap their toes to metered word,
When all is written yet unheard?
And would you save a dance for me,
That we may swing in victory?
For surely this is quite a feat,
To rhyme duet in 8 count beat!
(D)
If they don't dance, we surely will,
For joy and mirth our hearts to fill.
We'll do a jitterbug and jive,
And folks will know we are alive.
We'll put a smile on ev'ry face,
They will try hard to keep the pace.
Our song and dance will wow them all,
They'll think we're at the 'Strutter's Ball'.
(S)
With great delight I take your hand,
And hear you say "Strike up the band."
As we head out upon the floor,
To dance to rythym four plus four.
When other poets see us swirl,
They'll want to grab a guy or girl.
To try and match our dancing form,
And soon it will be quite the norm.
(D)
While we are in this dancing mode,
Let's take our show out on the road.
Along the way we'll take a chance,
And hope the world will learn to dance.
This little rhyme is growing large,
But it's still smaller than a barge.
It is quite fun to talk like this,
And normal speach I do not miss.
(S)
Ok my friend I do agree,
Lets hit the road, the world to see.
I too find that I do enjoy,
This word duet 'tween girl and boy.
You take the lead I'll follow you,
My pen and yours have written true.
Step out and show the world just how,
A curtsey meets a manly bow.
(D)
I wonder if we should now post,
This thing of ours to Y A host.
I think this might be just the time,
To sing duet in metered rhyme.
And prove to all it can be done,
Wrote by us two, but neither one.
So as we write, our souls unite,
And warms us as the morning's light.
(S)
Your right, I think, my worthy friend,
What you have started I will end.
Post away, that Yahoots might read,
And from example plant a seed.
With wink of eye and sassy smile,
I bid adieu for just a while.
And thank you kindly for the chance,
To boogie to this eight beat dance.
Yes, it was fun. From beginning to end we had no other dialog than the two stanzas per email.. It was for fun, because Sin had mad the comment that we might be able to communicate with just rhyme, on one of my poetic answers to her question. I decided to try, and this was the result. My co-author is a very talented lady who send back as good or better than she received. I applaud her vigorously.
20 Answers
- DaisyLv 71 decade agoFavorite Answer
Smilin', Dondi. That was truly fun to do. Thank you.
EDIT: And I you, Dondi. Your professional pen inspires me to match your effort. As is the custom in dance, you led...I followed. :-)
- Anonymous1 decade ago
This is a fantastic joint effort - BRAVO. A meeting of minds - at first not knowing what to discuss - then the fever takes hold and the dance begins. For is not creation - a dance in a sense. A fine example of what togetherness is all about - the light of two fires - spreads further into the shadows. It also looked like great fun. My compliments to you both ♥
- Andrew MLv 61 decade ago
That was something Beginning to end Worked out well working together It seems it could have gone on a lot longer Congratulations Sin Congratulations Dondi On a collaboration that works well together
- GrannyjillLv 71 decade ago
Wonderful...loved every bit of this...but I am so jealous. Dondi, choose me next time to join you in a rhyme, pretty please...or if there is anyone else out there who would like to give this idea a go, I'm game. I need something to get my poetic juices flowing again and it might help me.
(typo - you're...penultimate verse...picky me again, sorry)
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- 1 decade ago
This is what was SUPPOSED to happen. Communication, friendship, learning among people who love poetry and language. Sin was a novice a few short months ago; you are a professional, published for many years, receiving royalties from before the Internet. Together, you have done something outstanding.
I am ecstatic to see this. We are going to make history. We are going to shake the Earth and bring poetry into the mainstream. The Internet is the prime means of communication now, but all of this will also be on paper, published by real people (some of them world-famous) and by a real publishing house.
Source(s): http://www.poetsofmars.com/ - *Jellz*Lv 61 decade ago
S - Superb
D - Superb
Well done, well done....good work, good work
I echo the sentiments of all the supporting critical answers to this question
I echo the sentiments of all the supporting critical answers to this question
Bravo, Brava!
(See what happens when I talk to myself...I gotta practice!)
- gale sLv 51 decade ago
You two took a chance
Look at how your words do dance.
A new duo like Abbott and Costello
A.talented girl and dashing fellow.
No, more like Rogers and Fred Astaire
You definitely are a talented pair.
- 1 decade ago
Beautiful dialogue / duet, written by two very civilized poets (that's the prerequisite for poetic duets, I think).
- Anonymous5 years ago
write about anything. go for a walk. take note of what you see. do something crazy in public. write about how it inspires you. watch strangers. write about your observations. write about love, write about the ocean, write about your favorite pet and how they make you feel. Write about your favorite thing to do, your least favorite thing to do. write about the best thing that has happened to you, write about the worst thing thats ever happened to you. write about your deepest secrets, write about your biggest regrets. Write about what you wish for on a star, on an eyelash, at 11:11. write about whatever inspires you.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
This looks like a lot of fun.
I love to write and sing of you,
Your poetry rings oh, so true,
I wish that you would think of me,
And write me songs in poetry.