What do you think of Eternity's Home morning poem?

Love this... love pondering the concept of eternity.

P.S. Don't hate me... but take the apostrophe out of "its" in the second and eighth lines.

I think Eternity is mighty strong, starting again each day while everything else either laughs or slides into doom.

I'm not going to say this exactly right but this is so graceful, tranquil, soothing. I love it. "Sifting Forever through little fingers..." Simply lovely.

A very good morning!

Eternity eternally renewing itself in every new germinating seed on the face of any of the billions of planets beyond our grasp.

Wonderful poem Elys it brings to light anew the words of one of my favourite hymns.

"New is the Is the light of each new dawning day" how true, and in it a chance to

renew our outlook on life. Reassess our values.

How many others will seeit that way?.

I smiled as I read this, I think my favorite of yours. Smooth and hopeful. Lovely thought 'In every birth, in each child...Welcome For Eternity. And, in their eyes...Home.'

Excellence!

Yes, good Morning! Thank you!

Hmmm...untold sorrow pays for future life...children...get both sorrow and hope from this. Interesting combo that works well. Great pen!

...Sifting forever through little fingers...

Such a clear and sweet image appears to me.

Very nice

Pondering, is eternity really eternal?

This may be my favorite of yours, the soft meditative quality of the words, the subtle rhyme and smooth meter...Good morning!