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Ice
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Ice asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Moments in Time. Comments?

OUR MOMENT IN TIME

We have No Past.

The Future? No View.

There's only this Moment

Just Me.

Just You.

There is no Season.

No Winter.

No Fall.

No Work where the Drones

Prance about in the Hall.

No Christmas with Santa

And Donner

And Blitzen,

No Evil either.

No Bast@rds.

No Vixens.

Absent are Clocks

Or other Timepieces.

No War.

No Killing.

No Cons.

No Fleeces.

Negated as such

Is Old Age

And Despair.

No Sadness.

No Sickness.

No Death in the Air.

No Rat Race.

No Speeders.

No Deadlines to meet.

No Meetings to make.

No Stoplights to beat.

All that is left

Is Your Sweetness and Mine.

Just Me.

Just You.

Our Moment in Time.

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    stop the merry go round, I want off...

    Is this that moment I have been waiting for?

    When nothing and no one matters to me except the one in whose arms I am embraced?

  • 1 decade ago

    Long time no see, Ice! You came back with a good one! Really nice rhythm in this. A good perspective on what really is important.

  • 1 decade ago

    beautiful and just to let u kno im VERY critical of other people's work. i love it :) just one suggestion ...i kno u were trying to rhyme with Timepieces...but...FLEECES?? lol

    still very beautiful

    Source(s): my own opinion
  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Wow !!!!!!!! You are really good!

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  • Troll
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    (clap,clap,clap) very good dude!

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