How's this for a Cinquain? .....?

Hoo Haa! Makes a girl want to mend her broken heart and get back in some satin.

Sinful fibers ballet is my fav line.

Wonderful write!

i think of that a cinquain may well be poetic in case you % it to be, and the reader will see it as such if formed that way. you have multiple room for exploration and that i hit upon they're a great gadget to instruct one a thank you to write down with much less somewhat than extra words.. to declare the comparable ingredient. i hit upon the previous English varieties very stiff and confusing to examine, A cinquain is kind of a potato chip you the two like them or no longer and from time to time they advance on you .. Haha, i'm sitting in Vancouver a/p waiting for my flight to Seattle, took a million hour and 15 minutes to get with the aid of assessments and to my gate. it is going to be a protracted evening i'm getting to cellular at 1030 the following day morning.. yikes!

How is it for a Cinquain, hot and steamy!

How is it as a poem in general, hot and steamy.

Love the imagery here! sensual!

Good job Andy. You are really getting good at this stuff no matter what

iano AKA peter benoit has too say about it.

"The Troll Hunter"

Hey! Cool imagery. You're getting better with every post!

In total agreement with those above me...

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Fantastic! I think this is the first poem of yours I've ever read.

Why is that, hmmmmm????

"Sinful fibers ballet"

Awesome.

Satin is oh so "good." I love this.