This is the best poem I have ever written. Thoughts and opinions, please?

That's seriously awesome!!!

My favorite lines are

"But at the end of every line

I find it yet again you've rhymed

So predictably each time"

That's pure awesome :)

Nice job Mr. Crowley :)

Truthfully you wrote good verse

Yet fell into your own rhymed curse

With end rhymes stuck on every line

Don't trip Mr. C, it's fine

It matters not the times you've heard

Of love or doubt or any word

A poet worth his weight in ink

Will find new ways to make you think

All cool such fun to play with rhyme

No harm no foul it's not a crime

Your verse is nice and has good flow

Catch ya later..I have to go

At first I didn't think I was going to like it.. then I read into it and I really did :). Great job, normally I'm not a fan of things that rhyme.. but this one just works

First, I think the poem is more stinging that it is not, work in the core poetic singularity, or, by the poetry fairy.

You got it Mr Crowly

Titles are for the bards...

I got not opinion.. at the moment.. maybe tomorrow I will .. but for now.. I am practicing not having one.. it sucks.

i like 15/10 :)

its pretty good for a seventh grader.

Amazing. don't ever stop writing.

Not bad at all.

skeptically funny!

XD