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Mizzy
Lv 7
Mizzy asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

G'mornin! I think I wrote this.....it's a mish/mash...does it come close to working?

I saw the residue

of his reflection

as I walked

among the stones.

I saw the shape

of where he dreamt

left on the cold slab.

When lesions

burst, and leagues

overtake the fields

and the lessons

have fallen behind the

piano, where the fort

has melted from

overloaded nebulae

You decide that

no matter where you

look

nothing matters

but

now

Update:

ok...back to "normal"

Education & Reference > Words & Wordplay

Update 2:

now I see I used matter twice,

I'm not anti-matter, but sheeesh...

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    Yes, I was

    chewing Starbursts

    (except the yellow ones)

    in my square.

    Have a stellar

    form.

  • ?
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    In the final analysis we just get one day at a time.

    I enjoyed the trip and agree with the conclusion. Good write.

  • 1 decade ago

    Yes, it is working. I like the walking/thinking. Remembering is important, but it's the now that matters. Is it a specific slab -- the slab, or non-specific a slab, just wondering.

  • 1 decade ago

    Oh, I like this. I pictured a gray, foggy day walking along a stone fence I know.

    Great write.

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  • .
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    Don't change that double matter, Mizzy - like yer 2 z's, they work! Mish-mash? Pish-posh! It's great!

  • ?
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    Very profound, Mizzy. Sometimes it's a long, hard road in learning that we decide, but we really do. I love this message.

  • Perfect description of love loss and moving forward with one's life.

  • Daisy
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    I like this.. double matter too. i works dang well

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Livin in the moment! I love this. ♥

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    yesterday mourned

    for the day had come

    when then was now and

    now we are

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