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May I have your opinion?

Thank you.

The entry drew me in almost as strongly as a Red Carpet laid down

and I was in awe that this show had come to my town.

In the area there were large spotlights flashing,

music being played with drums and Cymbals crashing.

Once inside I caught my breath as if shocked by the electric

as my senses were assaulted by so many things eclectic.

Greeted and escorted as if this what "celebrity" was all about

I had the the elated feeling that this was heaven no doubt.

Euphoria was interrupted, a voice chimed, "Can I help you at all?"

It was as like an Actor called out to a second curtain call.

I said "Thank you", and smiled, "but I'd like to take it slow"

"After all I'm a guy and I'm in a new Home Depot."

S. Wolf

Update:

Hey you. Are ya close?

Update 2:

Thanks Marine, I never stopped writing really over the past 60 years.

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  • 1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    You've still got it... Its what you do.. but better wear your mask to avoid that deadly flu.

  • 1 decade ago

    Any good-standing member of the guys' fraternity

    Could perhaps spend an epic eternity

    Versifying on the euphoria

    Of encountering such a hardware emporia;

    The smells of copper and fresh-sawn lumber,

    The racks of tools and goods beyond number,

    The sales and the surplus, the doodads and choices,

    The do-it-yourself-ish cajoling voices;

    ---You're near to the mark, I grant you,

    And the experience does give the nerves pleasant jolts,

    But I'd have been happier if you'd added just a few

    More of the nuts and the bolts.

    A fun read, Maestro Wolf, a nice build-up, and a very good last two lines for a chuckle at the finish.

    A pleasure to read from you once again.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I have never thought of it like that. Next time i see a Home depot or a lowes I will think of you. lol

    Over all i really liked. it

    Could you look at mine?

    Keep up the writing =]

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    You've been writing for over 40 years?

    Still haven't got the hang of it, I see.

    Amateurish in the extreme.

    Is who close? You're nowhere close to being talented.

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  • ?$WAN
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    Good.

  • 1 decade ago

    lmao thats really good. :D

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