Tell me what you think?

I feel like I should add more, but I'm kind of out of words... The mood is sort of hopeless, as I wrote it when I was extremely bumm'd if that helps:

"At This Particular Moment In Time"

Don't try to find me

I'm officially off your radar

Orbiting 'round aimlessly

In another solar system

I'm [big] dipping into some other universe

Until I collide with a love so cosmic

At one point my heart fell like a supernova

At this point it's burn'd out, a fizzl'd meteor

&& at one point she was the Milky Way galaxy

But at this point she's like a black hole

I, the satellite

This, without a doubt, must make her the Moon

Even astronauts come back with nothing

&& even rocket ships come back broken

But one thing's for sure:

If daydreaming is what got me here

Imagine my destination when I am determin'd..