Please critique my poem "With Love"?

I like the imagery, however, they seem like four separate statements were i think they should flow into each other.

I see your poem like this:-

Be it Full mouth kisses

that Flood my heart with

Mind blown bliss.

as our arms enfold

and hearts melt with

Heat that would

refine the purest gold.

The love in your eyes,

Deep from heaven’s promise

my Hope from the divine

As your touch inflames

my Passion

and there lies

our responses with

Desire untamed.

Kate,

i think the critics would not get excited over this poem; but i am different i adore it.

Why ? I have lived it many, many times with an elderly partner who was a retired concert pianist.

An experience one cannot put into words; but you have come very, close to so doing.

If you lived near me i would invite you try and relive it with me..... Only if you were brave enough to

face hours of orgasms, and be totally exhausted in blissful sleep.

Great! It's very romantic and passionate! keep on writing poems!

For what it is it isn't bad. I just hate romantic gobbledy-****.

looovvee it!!!!!! good job! i really appreciate poems that rhyme!

Too graphic.

LOVE ISN'T REAL.

I like it a lot! :)

I LOVED IT! :]]