Would you care to comment on a poem ?

Such heart poured forth on every line.

and in response to the last two lines:

The idea of love precedes

whatever form comes forth

tangibly

be it verse or prose

or sighs, no one knows

until it appears to be seen

by the one forming the dream

and know that it will find its own

thanks for the sweet sonnet as a Q :)

Love is a lived sonnet, a serenader. A sonnet, otoh, could be written as a figment of great imagery of a talented word-manipulator poet ( who might never experienced Love, in full sense of the word).

Nice write, my friend.

Wish you the best.

The search for those words, like a love unfound

is a worthy quest, outcome, matters not

to not search, a sin, eternity cursed

Yes your mastery of sonnets grows. Sad to hear you have but one eye, but you know that might help focus in the other direction! lol

Sonnets are impossible (for me) and love is difficult :( I'm grumpy on the love subject lately. Nice about your eye!

Sonnets are hard - I find love much easier. Nice pen

Sonnets are easy. Love simply is. =)

Love is easy. Sonnets are hard. I pick love.

Sonnets are easy, love is hard.

I pick love.