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C.S.Scotkin asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Would you care to comment on this poem?

A SMALL TREATISE ON HUMOR

by C.S. Scotkin

Humor is the strangest thing,

That noteless music angels sing,

run the Devil through the door,

God Almighty’s two by four!

Sorrow, angst are found in bloom,

In poetry garden’s deepest gloom.

but humor hides, seed pods in soil

await a different gardener’s toil.

When first Eden’s Fruit was bit,

I think the Parents eyes were lit

I suspect they also learned,

laughed at that new life they earned.

Slap-stick comedy of Creation

ought to fill with revelation

sentient children, getting the joke

are freed from burdens of the yoke.

Acid taste of cold satire

Portrait of this wallow’s mire

Dry, ironic on the palate

So unlike the Stooges mallet.

Humor, mankind’s greatest gift,

our ability, spirits lift,

hand in hand with courage and grace

look upon Death’s mask and face

And laugh!

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  • 1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    that one skips right along...

    points to ponder thrown in to

    make those who notice use their brain?!

    nicely done.

  • 1 decade ago

    Making fun of lifes evils I think thats pretty good i likes it I do that all the time i have too. Life really messed up my cards so gotta laugh at something good job dave

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I have mixed emotions about this poem because while it is very good, making a poem about humor that is humorless is almost a sacrilege.

    Humor fell on it's head one day

    and tragedy rolled out.

    without my brain I'd be a stooge

    but with it I'm a lout.

  • 1 decade ago

    The best way to defeat a bully is to laugh at him/her. Death bullies us our whole lives long. To paraphrase Dylan, "Laugh, laugh against the dying of the light." It will at least slow Death down, that is a scientific fact.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Great poem! I love the concept too, very clever! I agree with it, many things are taken advantage of in the world. Very good read :), thanks

  • ?
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    a nice poem

  • 1 decade ago

    really well written and enjoyable tx

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