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Maureen asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

How would you write out, in words (or letters, anyway) the sound of a passing train?

"Chugga-Chugga Choo-Choo" doesn't really capture the actual sounds of a *real* freight train in the distance click-clacking into town, sounding a horn as it reaches a crossing, then fading away.

What words (or letter combinations, if you're going for re-creating the actual sound) would you use to write out the sound of a train passing a few blocks away?

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  • Dale
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago
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    GrungedlGrungedlGrungedlGrungedlGrungedlGrungedlGrungedlGrungedlGrungedl

    HRRNNnnnnnnnnnnnn

    GrungedlGrungedlGrungedlGrungedlGrungedlGrungedlGrungedlGrungedlGrungedl

    Either that, or "I think I can, I think I can, I think I can, ..." :)

  • 1 decade ago

    Clickerty clack, clickerty clack

    My wheels are singing over the track.

    To let you know I'm on my way

    Aaaar aaaar my whistle will say.

    But as I pass I make a different tone

    Aaaar oooo, aaar oooooo I moan.

    Click clack, click clack as I slow down

    Shhhhhhhh, my steam is heard all over town.

    Klink, klink my couplings come together

    As each carriage they serve to tether.

  • 1 decade ago

    One answer is avant-garde such as : Artichoke

    Another answer is by a reference to other moving objects: a tin-whistle, pots-and-pans

    Another reference is by onomatopoeia [I checked, I spelled this properly] such as: "Curchuffle", "Poot-Moot", or "Braze-Darling" or otherwise metallic

    Ding-ding-ding-ding is typical of the feeling, in conventional language [the New Yorker magazine would inevitably use this, nothing else could be chosen except perhaps "tin whistle" or "brassy din" or something vague like "steam noise"]

  • 1 decade ago

    Bro-ma seltzer, Bro-ma seltzer, Bro-ma seltzer. ( speeding up.

    or just chugging along.)

    ( Approaching a crossing ) Wooooooo, woo, woo, woooo...

    ( Approaching the stayion ) Woo, woooo, woo woo.

    Ding-dang, Ding-dang, Ding-dang. ( Bell )

    ( Then for a dead stop, they let off the steam ) Pshyiiiii i i i

    I would use - "Click-a-de clack, Click-a-de clack.

    Use all, part, or none.

    Good luck.

    Source(s): I took some rides on the C.M.&.O. ( Chicago, Mobil & Ohio ) in the 1940s and early 50s At least one of there engines was a - 4 + 6 + 2 - ( Wheels ) Google up - Steam locomotives and count the wheels.
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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Called "onomatopoeia," a train's noise would be like a clatter chink clank, intervals of ta-dunk (pause) ta-dunk, a bell's ting-ting, ting-ting, the horn's baleful waa waa, honk, whine.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Choo-choo, choo-choo, ch'boogie, woo-woo

    Woo-woo, ch'boogie, choo-choo, choo-choo, ch'boogie

    Take me right back to the track, jack

  • I think you got the classic onomatopoeia down.

    I'd probably write it, "CH sh sh sh CH sh sh sh CH sh sh sh CH sh sh sh."

    Source(s): I run a writing resource blog. www.presumingliteracy.com
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