I am writting about my religion and I want you tell me the mistakes please i mean check it please?

i am an atheist i don't know anything about religion and don't want to know.

but your first sentence does not make good impression sounds like a juniour student go ahead with practice

Your thoughts are fairly confused, and you need to expand your vocabularly. Also, people is a plural noun. "Peoples" is not grammatically correct. I would suggest you rethink what you are trying to say in the second paragraph, as it's very repetitive and confusing. How can someone hate their religion and try to ruin it? If they don't believe in it, surely it's not their religion? Also, I've read your paragraph multiple times and am still unaware what your religion actually is. If you're writing about your religion, shouldn't it be in there somewhere? I've tried to reword your thoughts below but have struggled with what you're actually trying to say in the second paragraph.

"There are many different religions throughout the world, like Islam, Christianity and Judaism. There are also people who don't have a religion.

My religion is very important to me. I would not like to do anything to denigrate its name, because I believe that it represents me as a person. However, there are those who seem to hate the religion they belong to, and actively attempt to destroy its name; equally, others may purport to love their own religion but badmouth other religions in an attempt to convince people that theirs is the best, and encourage everyone else to be the same as them. The most important thing is to love your own religion and accept and be respectful of other people's religions, as everyone has different beliefs.

Buddhists are atheists and that they are non secular, i think of maximum might agree. Atheism isn't a faith, you're good. this is merely a loss of perception in a god or gods. that's it. there is plenty extra literature than "The God delusion" on the difficulty of atheism. there is "Atheism: The Case against God" and "Why Atheism?" by potential of George H. Smith, "the top of religion" and "Letter to a Christian united states" by potential of Sam Harris, "Darwin's risky thought" and "Breaking the Spell: faith As a organic Phenomenon" by potential of Daniel C. Dennett, "god isn't super" by potential of Christopher Hitchens, "Why i'm no longer A Christian" by potential of Bertrand Russell, and so on.