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Would anyone read this novel?

I've been writing a novel for about a year now and am ready for some feedback. Pleasee give any criticisms or compliments!

A girl named Mary is about twenty five years old when she wakes up with no memory in a mysterious facility. She isnt able to recall anything about her former life but does realize that she had One. She is governed by Master Doctor William, whom she refers to internally as Master. He has the capability to control her with his words/commands if he wants to. Since Mary is at times very afraid and distrustful ( and with good reason) their relationship is fraught. The facility is actually a government run experimental facility unknown to Mary. She gradually remembers things from her past including the fact that her and master doctor William were married. Master refuses to go along with her escapes though he undoubtedly still loves her, her feelings left along with the memory wipe. There is a lot more detail and stuff but overall what do you think? If it makes any difference, the book involves many torture/execution scenes and maybe a sex scene.

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  • 10 years ago
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    it sounds really interesting and original and i like the fact that there will be some torture scenes. it just sounds cool and something i think people should want to read.

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    10 years ago

    So a man that loves his wife is willing to turn her into a memory-wiped puppet?

    There would be so many other people to choose from. Some might perceive that as quite a plot-hole.

  • 10 years ago

    I would read it. It sounds very interesting!

  • 10 years ago

    it sounds great!

    it is soo different and unique!

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  • 10 years ago

    sooooooo goooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so different from all the cliché stuff about 'true love with sloppy kisses' things, so its really original- please submit this to a publisher/editor!

    answer mine please http://uk.answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Aj... <3

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