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Dating With Extreme Prejudice - Critique Please?
~Dating With Extreme Prejudice~
Diligence dallies,
drawn between soft-shoe shuffle
of whispering corners,
where finger walking negates talking
‘cos tongues are knotted in spittoon embrace,
and voyeuristic carnage vomiting
from polished pine floor,
where stiff ***** bob to a racing heart
and booty is shaken not stirred.
Ice cube charms melting
under heated collars swerving to avoid
dangerous curves with no safety net
to cushion their fall,
and is it the last dance
when weaving a straight line
with digits as wet as the gusset
they dethroned,
or self relief merely misaimed.
1 Answer
- Mythical TalesLv 610 years agoFavorite Answer
It's wonderful. It's very abstract; I don't understand it fully, but that's OK, because it'll make me think of it's meaning, and allow for many varied interpretations.
Just the first stanza alone is detailed, full of imagery, and is a great way to start a poem. When I read poetry like this, it reminds me a bit of Sylvia Plath, in it's strange tone, and very non-simplistic meaning. Great job.