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shirleyf asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 10 years ago

Do You Think of Life's Cycle?

the droplets of rain

hanging from the pine tree

glistening with life

for what's needed below

the blessed cycle of

nourishing liquid from

sky to earth to all

another cycle

in one little day

we take for granted

will return again

the cycle, the pattern, the day,

the life will

come again

we assume.

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  • 10 years ago
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    Yowee so good in how you presented it, and its relevance, I'm glad I got to read.

    Um not to change your thought at all, and no offense meant, please know. As I began this, I thought these lines, but just my thoughts OK, Yikes.

    Droplets of rain

    cling, destined to fall

    from long needles

    of the tall Pine.

    Just sayin sweets, don't dare change yer own thing for me.

  • Ben
    Lv 5
    10 years ago

    It's there, beautiful as you say - that's why I think that Alpha said that it's female. He's referring to a tangent in philosophy and theology that the 'female' accepts things (like a vagina) where as the 'male' doesn't reject things but has a tendency to desire change of sorts (like penetration).

    We’re not so particular in what we say:

    Woman takes a thousand steps to get her way.

    But no matter how quickly she can hurry on,

    With just one leap the man will get it done.

    -From Goethe’s 'Faust'

    They're both the same imo - both take what it is and change it in some way or place it under scrutiny. Judging it to be right or wrong, acceptable or unacceptable. Apparently a female finds the spontaneous reality more acceptable and the male does not? It's a touch silly but has application in classification... Anyway.

    I like what Edward Hopper said: “The whole answer is there on the canvas.”

    Source(s): I like your imagery, it reminds me of when I was a child and desired nothing more than what was there. Equivocation, harmony, fidelitas
  • 10 years ago

    There is so much to remind us of the cycles of life, rebirth, etc. in nature. Liked your opening image a lot.

  • -
    Lv 7
    10 years ago

    Yes, Shirley, I do think of it....

    for a day

    a week

    a year

    a decade

    a lifetime

    and I pray I don't take any of it, not

    a moment of it

    for granted.

    I loved the message in your poem.

    Thank you for sharing it.

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  • 10 years ago

    Many times it's like a unicycle with bent and missing spokes.

    The tire may be flat also.Nice poem.Thanks

  • 10 years ago

    Yes, I think about Life's Circle very often! It is what makes us go on and on and on!

  • 10 years ago

    Yes, I do think of the Circle of life!

    It brings together the strangest characters! :))

  • 10 years ago

    i like the cycle motif

    (i've been too foggy lately

    to seriously comment)

  • 10 years ago

    nice poem each life has its own cycle

  • 10 years ago

    Why am I the only one who felt that this was portentous and ominous

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