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shirleyf asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 10 years ago

"The Piece" Care to Read?

"The Piece"

It was fully loaded

and placed in the center of the table

as they looked at each other

with the latest low

life had become

meaningless

with drugs being the

only

purpose at all

she'd given up on herself

kids left on their own

he lived in the moment

jacking whoever came along

who cares anymore

if we live or if we die

the gun, a game of fun

to either end it or

start anew in Hell

she laughed and flung her hair

to one side with glossed eyes

he laughed back

reached for the piece

and said

"Hey, Baby,

wanna' go for a spin?"

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  • 10 years ago
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    I am pretty used to this crap if it's possible to be jaded that much.

    Only one friend of mine used a gun,over a girl of all things.How sick.

    But everything is used for good,some of my contacts here IM with me.

    They tear me up talking about this damn curse.So,I spend hours,

    then all is good again.I'll never lose any more as long as I can breathe.

    Great poem,reminding me and others that life is terrible many times.

    Sometimes a simple hello can save a life,even though it's a merry-go-round.

    Bye,,,Thanks

  • Anonymous
    10 years ago

    "The Center Piece"

    It was fully loaded

    and placed in the center of the table

    as they looked at each other

    with the latest low

    life had become 

    meaningless

    with drugs being the 

    only

    purpose at all

    she'd given up on herself

    kids left on their own

    he lived in the moment

    jacking whoever came along

    who cares anymore

    if we live or if we die

    it was meant to be fun

    but everything goes to hell

    she laughed and flung her hair

    to one side with glazed eyes

    he laughed back 

    reached for a banana

    and said 

    "Hey, Baby,

    Who gave us the fruit basket?"

  • 10 years ago

    Shirley this was intense, and in it I added as I read, a thought of spin the bottle usin the gun, but wanna go to a light side and will allude to it here, but now inspired, I may let it rest here, for you to taste

    Around a kitchen table

    hungry children impatient, waited

    seated squirmin, they chattered

    as the brown log was brought

    from the cook stove and set.

    We clamored, heard "Shush and sit"

    we did, waitin as it was sawed through

    lookin like somethin Gramps might use

    to prop a tractor to change a tire,

    still it enticed desire.

    Once revealed it shone like the sun

    warm and in turn we all got a slice

    of Lemon cake in a loaf

    "Gram can we have another, please?"

  • 10 years ago

    Shirley. I am impressed beyond all SCOPE. Who would've guessed you'd come back with a BANG like this...This is right on TARGET. Got me all FIRED up...

    OK OK i will stop. I know this is not an amusing poem but there is something in my exposure to the situation depicted therein that has it feeling like a homecoming party. I swear. I LOVE THIS POEM!!!

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  • Anonymous
    5 years ago

    Glad you are happy. I deal with kids at work and boy am I glad to come home to a quiet house. One of the smartest things I ever did was not reproduce. You can't always get what you want... but sometimes, you still might find....

  • 10 years ago

    This poem gave me the chills Shirley. Scared stiff of guns.

  • 10 years ago

    I'm not at all scared o' guns, Cassie...some my favorite toys are guns, but I've more sense than t'bring 'em out 'round folks like shirley knows!!! NYUK NYUK NYIKES! They're the scary thang! WHOAH BAYBAY!

  • 10 years ago

    I hope you never accept that deceptive offer at the end.

    There is no peace in the so-called game of Russian Roulette!

  • 10 years ago

    I must of missed this one , and I really like your poetry Shirley ... I think everyone in America can have a gun, wears in England you can't .... unless you have a licenses.

    I like your poem it's very good can I have you as a contact please ..

    Thank you

  • 10 years ago

    yahoooooo, this is a terrific write, Shirley!!!!

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