Wrote a song for my gf.. totally lame or cute? GIRLS 10 points!!?

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Ok, we've been together over 5 years so we've done all buying gifts and stuff on holidays, birthdays, anniversaries etc. this year I wanted to write her a song...

Ok, the song is NOT all slow and sappy sounding. More of like a soft and up beat feel, just an acoustic and myself singing.

Anyway.... Here it is. 

Damn, you look so pretty with that smile that you're wearing. 
Is it fair at all that I can't help to be the one who's staring. 
And don't get me started on those beautiful black locks
I wanna run my fingers through, while you touch my... Face. 

Because, you are timeless
And you are classic
You are nerdy
And you stop traffic

And you're mine
Which sure is fine

I like the way those skinny jeans hug you like a lover
And if i got the chance, i would love to play under the covers
Wiggle, wiggle, wiggle, wiggle, wiggle, YEAH!
I just wanna say "i love you soooo bad"
..... Love ya giiiirl

Because, you are timeless
And you are classic
You are nerdy
And you stop traffic

And you're mine
Which sure is fine

Don't make me kiss you in the middle of this song
It would ruin the flow and sound totally wrong (pauses to kiss)
See i told you, now where the hell was i..?
Oh yeah, i told you that i loved you already, didn't i?

Because, you are timeless
And you are classic
You are nerdy
And you stop traffic

And you're mine
Which sure is fine
Fine like a ticket on the dash.. Haha


Anyyyyway... You'd have to know us. We're super fun and playful. What do you think? Good or lame??

? · Accepted Answer

i think its cool as hell plus its funny...i think she'll love it and it will make her laugh..girls like thoughtful and funny/goofy..this is a sure sure winner

persinger · Answer

I'm a woman n I'm shy til u get to grasp me. I'll sit down at school quiet n now not speak to someone n wen ppl speak to me I get frightened...... But if ik u n had been peers I'm plenty extra outgoing .... I simply get frightened round more moderen individuals n I get scared..... Guys consistently calls me lovable n lovable cuz I'm shy, quick, acquired a excellent frame, im sweetheart til u piss me off, stuff like that......

Anonymous · Answer

Hmmm I wouldn't like it to be honest. Kinda weird. stop traffic lol well I'm sure she will love it cuz her bf wrote it and tht what matters!! She knows how you are and how u roll with it lyrics. So don't worry wht we think!! But add in something that makes we blush and something to say awwwwwww baby about. !! Like ever since I met you girl I can't stop thinking about you, your my world! Or say whenever I see your cute face smile, makes me skip a beat girl, u give me goosebumps by just one touch, I can't ever see myself without you, cuz girl you make me a better person <3   

Hope I helped :)

Anonymous · Answer

Awwww Cutest Song Ever!!!!!Play This For Her ASAP;DD
<33

La, La, La · Answer

It's funny, but adorable <3

storm ;) · Answer

"I wanna run my fingers through, while you touch my... Face." that line sounds a little creepy. Try and change that. Otherwise I think it's very cute :)

Anonymous · Answer

If she has a sense of humor, I think she'd like it.

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