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Rayven53 asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 9 years ago

Could I hold up a Sister for y'all?!?

Will a starfish flung into the sea

ever make of me a better me?

Perhaps in that it constitutes a stand

lifting it up from lost there in the sand…

in this sole instance you’ve most surely won

by giving your heart wholly for just one!

Love, I think I’ll never likely be

prouder to claim as my family

such wonderful example for us all

of hope in Christ allaying any fall…

but claim I will and brag sister you are

and, like that fish, you’re nothin’ short of star!

With my oh-so-proud-o’-you love…RAH © 06/28/2012

Update:

Very much so, pc; she recently coordinated a fundraiser for another sister (in Christ...from church...both) and told that story... http://www.ordinarypeoplechangetheworld.com/articl... ...at the end...it said it all! And she was not the little girl...or even the first who picked up her challenge...just one of the many...and what an impact she had!

Update 2:

Cute LC..."Okay goils...gimme all yer rosary beads...an' make it schnappy!" And I AM held accountable...always. Never know when y'need be ready...and I AM goin' for "Well done good and faithful servant!"

Kels, darlin'...please do...and...try 'n'' get rid o' me!

Hiya Gem...and y'still are...but I'm not down under, love...I'm East Coast US, and I'm not a fan o' seafood at all, so woldn't know a Snook from a Flounder! heh heh

Hiya Beth...always so good to see you, love. How's t'ings? And thanks so much for a critique of my write vice my content. Apparently some can't grasp the concept of appreciatin' teh poetry while disagreein' with teh inspiration! I am not sharing the inspiration for critique! It is what it is...OF COURSE!!!

And Happy...I'm taklin' about you. I find it hard to accept amicable after "pollyanna crap" and worn rhetoric even the demons in R&S would reject

Update 3:

out of hand! You cannot possibly hope to float the "crap" argument that God MADE the misery we suffer, and then argue against it as sunfish salvation fact, ignoring the metaphor that makes the whole doggone thing neither movement or philosophy in and of itself! The creation argument you proffer is too naive an outlook to even warrant address. If ever you wish to explore the concept of creation and free will and their inextricable interrelationship, you have my email, but I'd prefer you restrict your critique here to my writing, not my heart...IT is sensitive, and I am its fierce protector.

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  • pc
    Lv 4
    9 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    cool

    I like the starfish analogy...the man walking along the beach tossing one in every now and again. I presume that's what you allude to.

    I'm sure your sister's proud

  • ?
    Lv 7
    9 years ago

    Just with the cadence of your speech you are able to write and it makes a natural rhythm. I love it when you post - it is always right there, right up front, but with skill.

    You are good Ray!

  • ?
    Lv 7
    9 years ago

    I don't understand the poem (the additional comments only add to the confusion) but I am always happy to see you in here!

    HH

    PS: I read the web-site. I am one of the "cold water" types that respond badly to this sort of pollyanna crap. The idea that altruism can "make right" the world is anathema to me.

    God MADE a world with so much misery and horror, and I cannot paper over that experience just to be "happy". Starfish need to be rescued for their own sake. When it becomes a "cause" a movement, or a philosophy I am against it.

    I am a firm believer that faith without doubt is worthless. Faith and reason examine and strengthen each other. Faith that says "heck with reality" I find toxic, any more than soulless reason can work for me.

    We are free of course to disagree amicably.

  • ?
    Lv 6
    9 years ago

    Ha! I knew you'd throw it back.I even throw my fish back! Unless of course it is a snook! Good one,Ray!

    Source(s): BTW,do you have snook down under?Perhaps by a different name?
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  • 9 years ago

    OMG You had me for a minute there I pictured you in a ski mask wavin' a pistol at a nun...LOL

    Just kiddin' I know ya better'n that!

    Good tribute for a worthy recipient. I love the ordinary people in this world.

    If you ever hear the words 'You will be held accountable' I know you'll be smiling because that can only be a good thing in your case!

  • Anonymous
    9 years ago

    Ray I want to keep this and the link and your friendship

  • ?
    Lv 7
    9 years ago

    Love is outta time.

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