Tell Me What You Think of This Scene?

*Sorry about all the dialogue. I don't always write that much, it's just this scene happened to have a lot of it. I need help making it more believable and the like. They're in a hallway at school in front of the MC's locker, after school's been out for the day for about 10 minutes. Thanks in advance for your time and help!*

"Jade!" I said, and she turned to face me.

I got lost in her beautiful hazel eyes. I licked my lips, wishing I hold her and kiss her. Even just once. She was so perfect in every single way. He slim build, her tanned skin, her blonde ringlets, the way her nose crickled and she threw her head back when she laughed...

"What did you want?" She said impatiently, interupting my thoughts.

"What?" I asked, hoping she hadn't caught me.

"You called?" She looked at me like I was from a different species.

"Oh, right. Are we still on for tonight?" I smiled my most seductive smile, my dimples fully exposed.

"Yeah, the test's still tomorrow, isn't it?" She said with a hair flip.

"I-Yeah." I blinked.

"See you later then, Kyle."

This time, I let her walk away, I watched her go, barely resisting the urge to turn my head to the side, or worse, call her back.

"Dude!" Shane slapped the side of my head.

I turned towards him, rubbing where he hit me.

"Sorry." I was anything but.

"She's my little sisters' best friend, don't be so obvious."

"I'm anything but!" I insisted.

"Dude, you're drooling."

"****!"

I wipped my mouth with the back of my hand, and sure enough, he was right. I hated it when that happened.

"Kyle, you're life is over," Shane said with a smirk.

He awkwardly patted my shoulder. We weren't exactly friends, but we were close enough to it. We hung out and we were both on the football team. But we never really hung out unless it was school or team related.

I shrugged. "It has been," I said, forcing myself to look like I was just joking.

It was, without a doubt, the hardest thing I had ever done.