A Choice. Even though I enjoy the dark poems, thought I would throw a little lite in the mix. Thoughts?

You have done the perfect thing with cliches - used them knowingly and re-purposed them. That is the best way and takes quite a bit of doing. Your poem made me breathe easier. Beauty.

This is terribly tragic, that you believe so despondent that it has advanced into vengeance, which only further violates the intellect and raises the soreness, regardless of how suitable it's going to seem. Or is this poem a look after for you, rather,developed to be impenetrable by way of making use of word of battle. Something the motive is that you simply wrote it, it most likely is an awfully powerful poem, full of robust feelings and vindictive proposal. My hope is that you don't relatively imply this is your ultimate poem. Selfishly, i might so much miss your poetry. You might be loved and needed right here.

The shorter the poem, the more difficult

to reach depth in your message,

You composed this one with concise style.

(I would lean toward "blade of grass").

Your poem flows well to a

satisfying ending.

Nice write, S.

This enchanting little light poem arrangd with a gradient for me to roam

produced a smile AND a little wiggle!

(no it`s not HRT- just nostalgia and happy and pleased at the charmingness of this).

*spec - blade/ speck*

:) (:

8.8/ 10

x

I chose Pikachu.

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whats an enchanted world witohut someone to enjoy it with:P

Nicely written and wlel thought out

Thanks for the read:3

....charmed,I'm sure.....Lunch?????