Can anyone C/C A Slip From the Future?

S t r a n g e :

I read this as, `Can Anyone Slip a C/C From The Future`?

H m m m . . . m m . .

bet your ears are b u r n I n g , un/ like the Bridge? lol

S t r a n g e

...but who`d trust in a dry run if one`s name I S `Ripple`.....? .

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I try to plan and organize but I slip on stones often. I like the part about grinning- better to have humor which at times I lack. You have a knack with light-hearted humor from what I've read of your poetry. I often read but don't comment on all I've read. You seem to have a natural gift towards the sunny side, people need that.

Make stumbling Blockers into 'stepping ( stones ).. Walking all over them .

And I'm not grinning either

Good poem

Long legs do not make a bridge without the "guide" ropes! lol Fun twist on a simple crossing gone awry although with humor awry!

clever and actually seems quite sincere, I almost got some very clear images but the sound of the water distracted me...

I think it's good, the bridge is out, so...yeah I get the poem. good metaphor.

I hate when that happens....