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Lv 6
? asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 7 years ago

"Sonnet 195" where is tomorrow? care to comment and/or critique?

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Sonnet 195

Her touch imbues my heart with so much joy,

And heals the wounds without a graven scar,

My mind, its usual questing wits employ,

Confirms I may have stumbled on my star,

That always, high among the blinking lights,

Which shrouds in mystery the starry skies,

Will hold in thrall a thousand dreamy nights,

Or spy ahead for where tomorrow lies;

But all Todays have sizzled well enough,

Not caring if the morning ever comes,

Or should the going soon becomes too tough,

To every pain and sorrow this heart numbs;

.......For with her touch, to joys would sorrows lead,

.......And wounds to healing right away proceed.

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  • 7 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    You probably just came home from seeing the movie GRAVITY when you wrote this,LOL!

  • Thomas
    Lv 7
    7 years ago

    Questor

    I have seen more passionate and better quality sonnets

    from you, but can't knock this for the structural integrity,

    the story was good, just not your usual blockbuster sir.

    Still quite good.

    Congrat

  • ?
    Lv 6
    7 years ago

    Beneath each rose lay tangled bed of thorns

  • 7 years ago

    That is beautiful.

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